Jaeden’s creative writing

Yesterday we did creative writing about a picture that Mr bell put on the screen. We could make our writing like a recount or a story. Here are the pictures we used yesterday and the day before:

                                       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here are 2 paragraphs of the picture on the left;

The trimmed, somewhat perfect grass, with a modern house, dull red and pearl white, just like any house you’ve seen. The giant trees towering the house, like a castle, barren and scarred like a dying tree, without the lush leaves, colours of a flame not like your formal autumn.

The tenebrous  water, with an ambiguous castle. Magic scintillated the diminutive, murky, latitudes, just enough to reason the castle and the sky. The moon, illuminating  the beauty of the mystifying castle, yet on the outside, looks serene and tranquil.

We will continue to write more creative writing about pictures.

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